Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson

Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson

Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson, Book #4 of the Stormlight Archive

Introduction

In Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson, the war continues between the human forces of the Stormfather and the Voidbringer forces of Odium. The Voidbringers have taken the kingdom of Alethkar, and the humans have retreated to the stronghold of Urithru. Dalinar Kholin leads humans and must decide where he should attack. Their strength is fading, and he must make the right decision or fail, leading to their destruction. Kaladin faces PTSD and must conquer great physical challenges to save them all. Will the forces of the Stormfather succeed or perish?

Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson

Summary–Six Viewpoints

There are six main viewpoint characters in this novel, including one viewpoint in flashback. The viewpoints are all about equal in importance. The viewpoints are Kaladin, Shallan, Dalinar, Navani, Venli, and Eshonai.

Summary – Flashbacks

Kaladin’s flashbacks were in Book 1. He suffers from PTSD incurred from the events of the last novel. In this novel, he struggles to heal himself and to protect Urithru. Kaladin is the leader of the Knights Radiant order of Windrunners.

Shallan’s flashbacks were in Book 2. Her struggle is with dealing with her other personalities, which are taking over more and more of her life. She created these personalities to cope with the terrible things that have happened to her in her life. The personality Radiant trains with the Shardblade and is the ideal Knight Radiant. The personality Veil pretends to be worldlier than Shallan and associates with the underground gang called the Ghostbloods. Shallan also has trouble figuring out her relationship with her fiancé, Adolin, who is Dalinar’s elder son. Shallan’s talents are creating illusions and creating items by surgebinding of stormlight. She is a member of the Knights Radiant Order of Lightweavers.

Dalinar’s flashbacks were in Book 3. His flashback chapters in Book 3 detailed why he does not remember his wife and what happened up to the time that he lost his memories. He becomes a Bondsmith (a Knights Radiant Order) and the leader of the humans at Urithru.

The flashbacks for Book 4 come from both Eshonai and Vendi. The flashbacks explain how Eshondi became the leader of the Parshendi war effort and how Vendi learned to use other forms to bring back the Voidbringers. Eshonai is only seen in flashbacks, while Venli has viewpoint chapters in flashbacks and in the current time.

Summary–Voidbringers and Parshmen

The Voidbringers took Kholinar, the Alethi capital. The humans gathered at Urithiru, the former city of the Knights Radiant, send a flying barge to rescue the residents of Hearthstone. Kaladin, Navani, and Dalinar take part in the rescue mission.

The Parshmen are a non-human race that has been the slaves of the humans and have been in a state that is called dull form, which decreases their intelligence.  The Alethi have been fighting the Parshendi on the Shattered Plain since the Parshendi had Dalinar’s brother, Alethi King Gavilar, assassinated by the assassin in white. The secret they discover is that the Parshmen are Parshendi in the dull form. Some Parshendi, called the singers, have brought the Everstorm back and have awaked the Parshmen out of dull form. The Everstorm brings the Voidbringers who are called the Fused. The Fused are singers melded with ancient powerful spirits of Parshendi trapped by the Heralds in another plane. The Fused seek to overthrow the humans and retake Roshar as their own. The original Knights Radiant had discovered a secret about the Parshendi and had forsaken their vows.

Summary–Rhythm of War

Kaladin, Dalinar, and Navani take a flying barge to rescue the citizens of Hearthstone. Their homeland, Alethkar, has been taken by the Voidbringers and the only safe place to take the refugees is the ancient city of Urithru.

They send Shallan and Andolin on a special mission to Shadesmar to enlist the aid of the Honorspren.

Dalinar takes the coalition army to Emul to defeat the Voidbringer forces gathered there.

Kaladin and Navani protect Urithru from a Voidbringer attack. Venli is part of the Voidbringer attack but doesn’t have the same goals as the Voidbringers.

Recommendation

Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanders is another outstanding book in the Stormlight Archive series. The book expands on the first three books and intensifies the conflict. The reader learns more about how Eshonai became the leader of the Parshendi and how Venli learned new forms which lead to the coming of the Voidbringers. Dalinar becomes a supreme war leader. Kaladin faces his biggest challenges yet. Navani faces an interesting dilemma concerning if you should help your captor if the help you provide could prove your downfall. Shallan deals with her multiple personalities and her relationship with Adolin.

The flashback character for book 5 is for Szeth-son-son-Vallano, and that should prove interesting. Books one to five are a division of the series, and a significant event should occur at the end of the next book. This series continues to amaze me, and I look forward to reading the next book and the following group of five volumes in the coming years.

Links

This is the link to the Goodreads page of Rhythm of War by Brandon Sanderson.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/49021976-rhythm-of-war

My review of Oathbringer by Brandon Sanderson. In book three of the Stormlight Archive, Dalinar learns the truth of his past through his flashbacks.

My review of Arcanum Unbounded by Brandon Sanderson, a collection with nine stories that are part of the cosmere universe. Many of the author’s works are interrelated by an overarching plot, which he calls the cosmere. He sets the stories of the cosmere on a group of worlds that can be traveled to by magical means. Six stories are set on the worlds of his published novels, and three stories are about worlds that have not had a novel-length story treatment. All the stories in this collection are excellent.

Gotham Writers Conference 2020

Gotham Writers Conference 2020

I attended the Gotham Writers Conference 2020.

Introduction

The Gotham Writers Workshop held the Gotham Writers Conference 2020 as a virtual conference because of COVID-19. Last year they held the conference at the Ace Hotel in New York City on October 25, 2019. This year, they used Zoom to hold the virtual conference from October 16, 2020, to October 18, 2020. On day one they held three presentations featuring writers. On the second day, they held three presentations focused on writers and agents. The last day was for pitching roundtables. They scheduled thirteen roundtables. Each roundtable had eight authors and two agents. Each author presented a query and the first two pages of their work to the agents. The agents gave their feedback.

This is the link to the Gotham Writers Workshop, the sponsor of the event.

Gotham Writers Conference 2020

https://www.writingclasses.com/

Summary

Friday, October 16 at 9:50 AM

The conference began with a welcome speech from Gotham president Alex Steele.

Friday, October 16 at 10:00 AM

The Writers: How I Got Published Panel with Jennifer Keishin Armstrong, Lev AC Rosen, and Jennifer Marie Brissett moderated by Dave Seigerman.

Jennifer Keishin Armstrong publishes non-fiction. Her Goodreads page is https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/4619632.Jennifer_Keishin_Armstrong

Lev AC Rosen is a novelist. His Goodreads page is https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/4731557.Lev_A_C_Rosen

Jennifer Marie Brissett is an SF novelist Her Goodreads page is https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/9536871.Jennifer_Marie_Brissett

The moderator asked questions of the panel and the panelists answered if they had something to say. Here are three examples I liked.

  1. What are you looking for in an agent? You need someone who knows what a contract looks like.
  2. Does the agent say they can cover different genres? I can do anything is a suspect statement.
  3. What is success? The goalposts keep moving. It’s okay if you are writing for yourself.

Josh Sippe conducted a brief audience Q and A session during the last ten minutes of the panel.  

Friday, October 16 at 11:25 AM

The Benefit of Your Day Job (even if you dislike it) presentation by Jacob M. Appel.

Alex Steele introduced Jacob M. Appel. Jacob has written 200 short stories, 19 novels, and has 9 advanced degrees. They featured him in an Amazon Prime documentary linked below.

Jacob believes that having a day job helps you as a writer, giving your writing context.

He gave ten things that he has learned to help him write well. Three of his points follow.

  1. Make writing your third priority after family and occupation.
  2. Write a novel to ask a question not to answer a question.
  3. Readers want to read something they don’t know, but the writer does. Know more than the reader.

Jacob had the audience take part in an eight-minute exercise. He had us write a scene using jargon from your specialized field or occupation.

The talk ended with a Q and A session with Josh Sippe as the moderator.

Friday, October 16 at 12:30 PM

Kelly Caldwell interviewed Erin Entrada Kelly about her writing journey.

Erin Entrada Kelly is the 2018 Newberry award-winning author of Hello, Universe. She discusses her writing journey.

Goodreads link to Hello, Universe by Erin Entrada Kelly.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/30653713-hello-universe

Here are three interesting observations from the interview.

  1. Find the thing that makes your character unique and universal.
  2. Use yourself as a source of inspiration.
  3. She writes all her works longhand in a notebook because she says using more of your senses engages you with the work better.

The talk ended with a Q and A session with Josh Sippe as the moderator.

Saturday, October 17 at 10:00 AM

Agents: Why We Will Rep You Panel with Stephen Barr, J. L. Stermer, and Eric Smith moderated by Samantha Fabien.

Three literary agents discuss what will compel them to take you on as a client.

Stephen Barr is an agent at Writers House agency representing adult literary, non-fiction, and YA.

https://www.publishersmarketplace.com/members/sbarr/?_ga=2.233505950.1007296491.1609353739-447247430.1609353739

J. L. Stermer is an agent at New Leaf Literary Agency representing 70% non-fiction and some YA.

Eric Smith is an agent at PS Literary representing adult and YA science fiction.

https://mswishlist.com/agent/ericsmithrocks

Samantha Fabien is an agent at the Laura Dial Agency.

The moderator asked questions of the panel and the panelists answered if they had something to say. Here are three examples I liked.

  1. What makes a query stand out? The hook, comp titles, platform (for non-fiction), and compelling first pages.
  2. What is your deciding question for offering representation? Where do you think your career is going? Do we have chemistry, a working relationship?
  3. What qualities are most important to see in an author? (JL) content, character, voice. (ES) voice, sell, communication. (SB) connection, sincerity, engagement.

The talk ended with a Q and A session with Josh Sippe as the moderator.

Saturday, October 17 at 11:30 AM

The Agent and Client–making a connection discussion. Josh Sippe moderated the discussion between Amy Bishop, an author, and June Hur, an agent.

An agent and a client discuss how to connect with each other.

Amy Bishop is an agent at the Dystel, Goderich, and Bourret Agency.

https://www.dystel.com/amy-bishop

June Hur’s debut novel is The Silence of Bones, a murder mystery set in 1800 Korea.

This is the Goodreads page for The Silence of Bones

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/44280973-the-silence-of-bones

The moderator asked Amy and June questions. These are three Q and A examples I liked.

  1. How important is a query letter? (AB) a well-crafted query letter says that the author is serious. Queries are hard, but don’t need to be perfect to be effective.
  2. Can rejections be positive? (JH) Publishing is a marathon. Rejections are subjective and not personal. Keep your perspective as an author.
  3. What was the timeline for The Silence of Bones? (AB) Query in August 2017, Agreement September 2017, Submitted to editor February 2018, realization that the novel is YA, Big revision to the editor in August 2018, published by Feiwel & Friends in April 2020.

End of discussion.

Saturday, October 17 at 12:30 PM

Alexander Steele conducted the Pitching Game Show with Alec Shane, Alexandra Levick, and.

Alec Shane is an agent at Writers House.

Mina Hamedi works at the Janklow and Nesbit Agency.

https://www.minahamedi.com/

Noah Ballard is an agent at Curtis Brown.

The contestant’s goal was to practice their pitching skills. They picked a contestant, and Alex Steele drew a character and a situation at random. The contestant had a few minutes to prepare a pitch. The contestant gave the pitch to the agent panel and ended the pitch with a proposed title for the book. They picked four contestants, and they gave their pitches one at a time. The agents could not reach a consensus, so all four contestants received a $50 gift certificate for a class at Gotham Writers Workshop.

Sunday, October 18 from 12:00 PM to 4:30 PM

The SF/Fantasy Pitching Roundtable #2 with Kurestin Armada and Dong Won Song.

Each session was on an individual Zoom call with eight participants and two agents for each table.

The first group session had six tables: Literary/Mainstream 1, Literary/Mainstream 3, Middle Grade/Young Adult 1, Mystery/Thriller/Horror, Non-Fiction 1, and Science Fiction/Fantasy 2.

The second group session was from 3:00 PM to 7:30 PM and had seven tables: Literary/Mainstream 2, Literary/Mainstream 4, Middle Grade/Young Adult 2, Non-Fiction 2, Non-Fiction 3, Picture Book, and Science Fiction/Fantasy 1.

I took part in the SF/Fantasy Pitching Roundtable #2. In the first part of the roundtable, each participant read their query letter, and the agents made their comments. It took about ten minutes for each query letter. A 30-minute break followed. In the second part of the roundtable, each participant read the first two pages of their novel and the agents offered their feedback.

Recommendation – Conclusion

I enjoyed virtually attending the Gotham Writers Conference 2020. I’m glad they could hold the conference. Last year in New York City I did not have my novel presentation completed in time to earn a spot at the pitching roundtables conducted on October 26, 2019. This year I took part in the Science Fiction/ Fantasy Roundtable #2. My star of the Con was Alex Steele. He gave a great welcome speech, introduced Jacob M. Appel for his presentation, and conducted the Pitching Game Show. The conference was well worth the time invested, and I would like to attend next year.

Links

Recap for the Gotham Writers Conference in New York City, New York on October 25, 2019, sponsored by Gotham Writers Workshop. There were five panels and presentations at the conference. I did not attend on October 26, 2019, for the pitching roundtables.

On Writing Well by William Zinsser

On Writing Well by William Zinsser

On Writing Well by William Zinsser

Introduction

On Writing Well by William Zinsser is the classic guide to writing non-fiction. The first section of the book details the best way to write well, whether writing fiction or non-fiction. On Writing Well is littered with quotable quotes and excellent advice. The rest of the book covers the various modes of non-fiction writing, including many examples from the author and others. If you want to write well in any application, then this is the book for you.

Summary – Four Parts

On Writing Well by William Zinsser has four parts, Principles, Methods, Forms, and Attitudes. I will examine each part and will insert the most informative quotes from each part. When I read this book, I made four pages of notes which helped me write this summary.

Summary – Part 1

Part one: The Principles has seven chapters. My favorite quote from Chapter 2: Simplicity is “The secret of good writing is to strip every sentence to its cleanest components.” (page 7). Two important concepts are from Chapter 5: The Audience “You are writing for yourself, (page 25) and Chapter 6: Words “writing is learned by imitation.” (page 35).

Summary Part 2

Part two: Methods has three chapters. In chapter 8: Unity, the quote is “you learn to write by writing.” (page 49). Quote from Chapter 9: The Lead and the Ending, “the most important sentence in any article is the first one.” (page 55). Chapter 10: Bits and Pieces covers short ideas on writing.

Summary – Part 3

Part three: Forms has two introductory chapters and covers seven types of non-fiction writing. The seven types of non-fiction writing are travel, memoir, science, business, sports, arts, and humor. An example of how to use quotes in non-fiction writing is the article by Joseph Mitchell called “Mr. Hunter’s Grave” published in the New Yorker magazine. The publishers collected it with five other articles in the book The Bottom of the Harbor by Joseph Mitchell. (page 113)

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/608217.The_Bottom_Of_The_Harbor

Another book that sounded interesting to me and quoted in the science chapter was The Periodic Table by Primo Levi. (page 159) The book is a collection of 21 short stories with each title from an element in the periodic table. The author’s experience during the Holocaust influenced the stories.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/427282.The_Periodic_Table

Summary – Part 4

Part four: Attitudes is five chapters on the process of writing and revising. The best part of this section is from Chapter 23: A Writer’s Decisions. In the chapter, the author relates his decisions he made when writing the article “The News from Timbuktu” published in Conde Nast Traveler. (pages 265 to 285) There are extensive quotes from the article and detailed explanations.

One final quote from Chapter 24: Write as well as you can, “You will write only as well as you make yourself write.” (page 293)

Recommendation

On Writing Well by William Zinsser is a brilliant book on writing. I first learned of this book at the Western Reserve Writers Conference in 2016. At the conference, the keynote speaker John Ettorre spoke about his relationship with writer and editor William Zinsser. Zinsser was a mentor of his who had passed away in 2015. He described how Zinsser had encouraged him and many others in the craft of writing. Zinsser’s most famous book is On Writing Well. I planned to read the book then. I write fiction, but half of my writing is for my non-fiction blog at garydavidgillen.com, so I thought this book would help me with my non-fiction writing.

Links

This is the link to the Goodreads page of On Writing Well by William Zinsser.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/1176982.On_Writing_Well

Plot and Structure by James Scott Bell is a book about writing subtitled techniques and exercises for crafting a plot that grips readers from start to finish. The author gives his advice about how to develop a satisfying plot for your novel.

Another similar book on writing is How to Write Best Selling Fiction by Dean Koontz. This is the link to my review. The book from 1981, but the advice is still great.

Writing Progress Report December 2020

Writing Progress Report December 2020.

This is my Writing Progress Report December 2020.

Writing Progress Report December 2020

The first snow of the year. Power out at work. At home a day and a half.

Writing Progress from November 2020.

I wrote two blog posts for garydavidgillen.com including my writing progress report for November 2020 linked below.

Updated nine posts in November 2020 on my website to improve their SEO rating to good, to leave 9 posts to update in December 2020.

In July 2018, I completed the first draft of my novel Assassin in New Marl City, totaling 99,981 words and 36 chapters. Completed pre-second draft (30 chapters long) in December 2018 at 89,072 words. Finished the second draft edits in December 2019 to complete the second draft edit. I started writing a new Chapter 1 in February 2020 and finished it in April 2020. The third draft will have 32 Chapters, and I finished the third draft edits on Chapter 3 in July 2020.

In November 2020, I submitted Chapter 5 of my novel named Cuba Liberto to the Novel Writing Workshop at Parma, Ohio library.

In November 2020, I submitted the story “Thanksgiving?” to the Introductory Writing Workshop at Parma, Ohio library.

I submitted Chapters 1 and 2 of my novel Cuba Liberto to the Wednesday Fiction Writing Workshop at the South Euclid-Lyndhurst Library in November 2020.

Writing Progress from November 2020 Continued

I made five posts on my Goodreads account in November 2020.

In the past, I submitted the stories; Four Humors, Space Station Sunyata, and Grognard to magazines.

The seven Flash Fiction Stories I have submitted in 2020 are Space-Dog Confession, Sleeping Sickness, Caliburnus, and Popular Mechanics Re-brewed, Wormhole Generator, Runs with Scissors, and Principled Rogue to magazines.

I submitted “Runs with Scissors” to Strange Horizons in October 2020.

On December 1, 2020, I submitted “Sleeping Sickness” to Cast of Wonders.

Magazine submissions for 2020 are 7 unique stories submitted 19 times with 0 accepted, 2 pending, and 17 rejections.

Events from November 2020.

The next conference I had planned to attend was ConFusion in Novi, Michigan from January 15 to 17, 2021. The Ann Arbor Science Fiction Association sponsors ConFusion. They canceled the Conference for 2021 due to COVID-19. They plan to hold the next ConFusion in January 2022.

https://2020.confusionsf.org/

Writing Goals for December 2020.

I plan to write five blog posts for garydavidgillen.com including my Writing Progress Report for December 2020.

The name of my next novel is Cuba Liberto. I plan to write Chapter 6 in December 2020 and submit it to the Novel Writing Workshop at Parma, Ohio library.

In December 2020, I plan to submit a story to the Introductory Writing Workshop at Parma, Ohio library.

I plan to work on third draft edits for Assassin in New Marl City using comments from the Novel Writing Workshop at Parma, Ohio. I plan to complete third draft edits for Chapters 4 and 5 in December 2020.

Submit the stories Space-Dog Confession, Four Humors, Space Station Sunyata, Grognard, LARP Film noir, Sleeping Sickness, Popular Mechanics Re-brewed, and Caliburnus. to other short fiction magazines. I plan one submission for December 2020.

Polish and submit the stories White Bracer, Mage Squad, I Shall Not Return, Prisoner of Tarnal, and Kay-Eye for submission to short fiction magazines.

Writing Goals for December 2020 continued.

In December 2020, I plan to make five posts on my Goodreads account and update nine posts on my website to improve their SEO rating up to the good level, leaving no posts left to update.

Put the novel, Assassin in New Marl City, into the writing program, Scrivener.

Buy an e-book cover for Assassin in New Marl City from Fiveer.

Planned Events for December 2020.

The next conference I had planned to attend was ConFusion in Novi, Michigan from January 15 to 17, 2021. The Ann Arbor Science Fiction Association sponsors ConFusion. They canceled the Conference for 2021 due to COVID-19. They plan to hold the next ConFusion in January 2022.

https://2020.confusionsf.org/

No Ones Home by DM Pulley

No Ones Home by DM Pulley.

No Ones Home by DM Pulley.

Introduction

No Ones Home by DM Pulley is about the five families that have owned a mansion named Rawlingswood in Shaker Heights, Ohio. The novel switches points of view from 1922 to 2019. The house has a reputation for males losing their lives and females losing their sanity. In April 2018, Myron and Margot Spielman arrive from Boston and buy the mansion cheaply. Will the Spielman’s survive the mansion, unlike the four families that preceded them?

No Ones Home by DM Pulley

Summary

No Ones Home by DM Pulley features the five families that have owned a mansion named Rawlingswood. It was built on land originally owned by the Shaker religious group. The Shaker colony thrived in the area from 1822 to 1889 when it closed. Shaker Heights was established in 1909, and the mansion was built in 1922 by Walter Rawlings.

The Rawlings Family owned the mansion from 1922 to 1931. Walter Rawlings had the mansion built. Georgina is his wife and his son is little Walter. Their section in the novel starts on October 26, 1929, the day the stock market crashed. Bootlegging and The Great Depression are important events for their section. The fates of the Rawlings family begin the terrible reputation of the house. 

The Bell family owned the mansion from 1936 to 1972. Their family does not have a point of view in the novel, though members of the family have input in the plot of the other families.

The Klussman family owned the mansion from 1972 to 1990. Benny is autistic and his mother Frannie cares for him. His father left them years earlier. Their section of the novel starts on June 18, 1980. Benny faces a dilemma he cannot resolve because of his limitations of thinking and conversing.

Summary Continued

The Martin family owned the mansion from 1994 to 2016. Ava and her brother Toby are governed by Papa Martin (Clyde Martin). Their section of the novel starts on March 1, 2009. Ava notices writing on the walls, including something about Benny. She feels a presence in the mansion that other people do not.

The Speilman family bought the mansion on April 7, 2018. They are from Boston. Myron is a doctor and Margot is a yoga instructor. The mansion is distressed, so they remodel the house. The remodel does not go smoothly. Their high school age son is named Hunter. They arrive on July 18, 2018, before school starts. Hunter learns about the history of the mansion and must decide what he will do with his knowledge.

Recommendation

No Ones Home by DM Pulley is a well thought out ghost suspense thriller. The four threads of the story separated in time come together. The secrets that Hunter’s family kept are revealed and the mansion’s secrets are discovered. I like how the story is resolved. I live near and have been in Shaker Heights, so this novel was interesting to me. The mix of mystery, history, and thriller works.

Links

This is the link to the Goodreads page of No Ones Home by DM Pulley.

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/52921754-no-one-s-home

Unclaimed Victim by D.M. Pulley connects the stories of Ethel from March 1938 and Kris from April 1999 through the Torso Killer of Cleveland. They are targets. Can they survive? Link to review.

This is the link to my review of The Dead Key by D.M. Pulley.