How to Write Best Selling Fiction by Dean Koontz

Introduction

Dean Koontz wrote a book in 1972 called Writing Popular Fiction for Writers Digest Books. In 1981 he expanded and rewrote it and published it as How to Write Best Selling Fiction. He mentions doing another edition in about ten years, but it’s been over thirty years and no new edition has been released. I heard about this book from many sources over the years but did not pick up a copy. Recently, an internet writing teacher I follow, Jerry Jenkins, mentioned it at jerryjenkins.com. He wrote the Left Behind series and over 190 books. He says Koontz’s book inspired to become a writer. The advice within helped him to write fast and well. So, with those recommendations in mind, I resolved to buy the book, since it was unavailable through my library. It can only be bought as a used original edition. The cheapest copies at Amazon were $200, so I gathered together my Amazon gift cards and ordered a copy. My copy arrived, and the dust jacket looked pristine as showed in the picture attached to this review. The book’s first printing was 1981. This book is from the second printing in April 1982. The binding is broken in one spot. That can be seen in the second attached picture. The reader marked the book in ink and highlighted passages with a yellow highlighter. Observations are written in the margins by the first reader and some of them are insightful. No pages are missing or torn.

Summary

So, what information did I learn from this book? The book is 309 pages long with 15 chapters of advice and definitions. Koontz explains why he wrote this book, explains his writing process, and gives examples excerpted from his fiction. Key points from page 75 are that the novel’s protagonist must face terrible trouble at the novel’s beginning and from page 111 the complications must build up to a final and worst complication leading to the resolution. He describes how he uses the idea pump on pages 65 and 72, a free-form word association used to create an idea for a novel-length work. Koontz describes his four-point classic plot story pattern for successful novels on page 74. This is the structure that Jerry Jenkins teaches. The main take away of the book is given in eight points of what a reader demands on page 13.

  1. A strong plot
  2. Action, Action, Action
  3. A hero or heroine
  4. Believable Characters
  5. Character motivations explained
  6. Developed setting
  7. Good Grammar and Syntax
  8. Style: use vivid and visual writing

These eight points are explained in chapters 4 to 11. Koontz specifically gives his advice on how to write successfully in the science fiction and mystery genres in chapter 12. He gives writing advice in chapter 13 and publishing advice in Chapter 14. Chapter 15 is an exhaustive list of the authors Koontz recommends reading including their best-known works. He believes that to be a writer of popular fiction, you must read the popular authors to learn how to write like them. A serious writer would want to read them all. There are 101 authors named, and I have read works from 44 of them.

Recommendation

            So, what is my opinion of the book? Koontz uses a conversational tone that establishes him as a mentor to the reader. The advice is solid and applicable for today. The examples are dated but also interesting. I can see why this book could not be updated. It would have to be completely rewritten with new examples and updated genre information so that is probably why Koontz has not done it so far. I am a better writer having read this book, so I am glad I purchased it. It is one of the best writing books I have read. If you enjoy writing, then I suggest buying or borrowing a copy.

Links

Link to the Goodreads page for How to Write Best Selling Fiction by Dean Koontz.
https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/286475.How_to_Write_Best_Selling_Fiction

Link to my review of another great book on writing called Beginnings, Middles, and Ends by Nancy Kress.

The Autumn Republic by Brian McClellan

Book #3 of the Powder Mage Trilogy

Introduction

War has come to the country of Adro in this gunpowder mage fantasy. The main characters, Field Marshal Tamas, Powder Mage Taniel Two-shot, and Inspector Adamat, seek to liberate Adro from its enemies. The Brudanians hold Adro’s capital city of Adopest and the Kez army is driving up through Surkov’s Alley. Taniel and the main Adran army is stuck in between them. Tamas and his two veteran brigades along with their Deliv allies are hurrying to save the day. Can the two armies meet up in time? Can Taniel’s savage priestess keep the sleeping god named Kresimir asleep keeping him from destroying the whole world? Can the heroes win the war and save Adro from its enemies?

Summary

This is the third book in the powder mage trilogy, so long-standing plot threads resolve though new ones start to set up the next trilogy in this series. Field Marshal Tamas threw over the Adran monarchy before the events of the first novel. He wants to develop a long-term plan to support a republic and throw out the foreign invaders of Adro. Tamas is a powerful powder mage. Powder mages ingest gunpowder by eating it or sniffing it. The powder gives them supernatural powers. Taniel, Tamas’s son, is also a powder mage. His talent gives him healing power, strength, and the ability to direct bullets from his gun to his desired target. Taniel loves fighting in the war but despises politics. Setting up a republic demands the election of a prime minister. The candidates are labor leader Richard, who wants Taniel as his running mate, and Lord Claremont. The election will have ramifications for Adro’s future.

Some people in this world have special abilities of a minor nature and they are called Knacked. Inspector Adamat’s knocked power is a photographic memory which helps him solves cases. He works for Tamas trying to learn about what is going on in occupied Adopest. Another type of magic power is used by the Privileged, who tap into an elemental power they call the Else. Bo is the last living member of the Adro Cabal, a group of privileged, and his apprentice is named Nila. The wildcard is Ka-poel who has a voodoo-like talent using dolls. Taniel brought her to Adro from savage Fatrasta during the time when he fought there. She is honor bound to him. He treats her like a younger sister sometimes, but at other times he thinks of her a potential lover. Vlora, another powder mage, was Taniel’s former lover and almost fiancé. She conflicts Taniel because they have feelings for each other despite their breakup. Olem is Tamas’s most trusted aide. He is romantically linked to both Nila and Vlora.

All these characters have come to Adro in this novel and must succeed in each one’s individual tasks doing their part to save the republic. An unexpected powerful enemy disrupts their plans and they must improvise or not just Adro, but the whole world will be in jeopardy of destruction.

Recommendation

The Autumn Republic was a great conclusion to the powder mage trilogy. The many viewpoint characters complete their assigned tasks and prepares for the final challenge. The conclusion changes the world forever but shows how the next trilogy will begin. The next trilogy is called Gods of Blood and Powder starting with the novel Sins of Empire which was released in 2017. Wrath of Empire was released in 2018 and Blood of Empire is scheduled to be released in 2019. I have a copy of Sins of Empire and will read it soon in 2019. Highly recommended. I suggest reading the whole trilogy, from the beginning to the end.

Links

Link to Goodreads page for The Autumn Republic

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/20883847-the-autumn-republic?ac=1&from_search=true

Link to my review of The Crimson Campaign (Powder Mage Book #2)

Artemis by Andy Weir

Introduction

Jasmine “Jazz” Bashara is a poor smugggler and thief on the moon colony of Artemis. She dreams of being rich, but won’t get involved with drugs and guns though that is where the most money is. That is until she gets an offer she can’t refuse. All it’ll take is a little sabotage and she can retire with a million Artemisan slugs. But the best laid plans never work and she must improvise or she’ll be killed by a Brazillian drug cartel assassin or die with everyone else in Artemis by poisoned air. How can she survive and get her money too?

Summary

Jazz came to Artemis as a little girl, she is 24 at the time in the novel, so the moon is all she knows. Her father is a welder who wants her to work with him, but she doesn’t want that boring vocation. She works as a porter, waiting until her plans pay off. What she wants is to earn her EVA license, so she can get big money conducting EVA tours at the Apollo 11 landing site for tourists, but she fails her test which sets the caper into motion. She longs to pull off the big score. She’s small, smart, and sassy. The novel is seen from her perspective. Any task she tries, she succeeds, but she is usually unmotivated to try. Trond, a billionaire speculator, makes her an offer she should refuse, but she decides to take it to accomplish her goal to become rich. Jazz starts her scheme but must rely on her friends; techno geek Svoboda, smuggler partner Kelvin, and her EVA master friend Dale, the gay guy who stole her boyfriend for himself. All of them and Jazz’s father get involved with her plans. To accomplish her goal, Jazz must face Rudy the cop, an assassin, the Artemis colony leader, and the architect of the Aluminum smelter that Jazz must sabotage.

Recommendation

I enjoyed reading this novel. It runs at a brisk pace. Jazz has a sarcastic voice like Mark Watney from The Martian, also written by Andy Weir, but she remains a young woman. Her challenges come quickly one after another. The science is woven into the story deftly. She analyzes her options and figures out ingenious solutions as she goes. The story barrels on to the end. The side characters are memorable, and the conclusion resolves the plot satisfactorily. Highly recommended.

Links

Link to Goodreads page for Artemis

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/34928122-artemis?ac=1&from_search=true

Writing Progress Report for December 2018

Cleveland Orchestra

Nothing like the Christmas Concert with the Cleveland Orchestra and a choir at Severance Hall in Cleveland, Ohio. I attended on December 22, 2018. Jamie Farr narrated The Night Before Christmas. The whole show was wonderful.

Writing Progress from November 2018

I wrote 1 blog post for garydavidgillen.com.

I bought and used the editing program Pro Writing Aid to edit the novel. I edited and typed Assassin in New Marl City Chapters 30, 32, and 33 in August of 2018. I started reviewing Chapters 34, 35, and 36 in September and plan to finish the review in December.

The first draft of Assassin in New Marl City was complete at 99981 words in July of 2018. Decided to cut six chapters to use in book #2 and write two new chapters to end up with about 88000 words in book #1. I wrote the new Chapter 5 in September and new Chapter 10 was written in early December.

I wrote the story, Popular Mechanics Rebrewed, for my writing class.

The stories 4 Humours, Space Station Sunyata, Grognard, Get to the Point, and LARP Film Noir have been submitted to magazines.

Statistics of magazine submissions for 2018 are; 0 different stories submitted a total of 0 times with 0 accepted, 0 pending, and 0 rejections.

Events from November 2018

I missed the Book Baby Authors Con in Philadelphia, PA, on November 4, 2018.

Writing Goals for December 2018

I plan to write 4 blog posts for garydavidgillen.com.

Write the second of two new chapters for Assassin in New Marl City. It is the new Chapter 10.

Type the edits for Assassin in New Marl City Chapters 34, 35, and 36 in December 2018.

Edit Chapters 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, and 9 of Assassin in New Marl City using comments from the Advanced Writing Workshop at Parma, Ohio.

Revise Space Station Sunyata for my intermediate writing workshop at South Euclid, Ohio.

Polish and submit the stories Sleeping Sickness, Space-Dog Confession, White Bracer, Mage Squad, I Shall Not Return, Prisoner of Tarnal, and Kay-Eye for submission to short fiction magazines.

Submit 4 Humours, Space Station Sunyata, Grognard, and LARP Film Noir to other short fiction magazines.

Edit Searcher of Riven.

Hire an editor for Searcher of Riven from Fiveer.

Edit Ruins of Yarnud.

Hire an editor for Ruins of Yarnud from Fiveer.

Put the novel, Assassin in New Marl City, into the writing program, Scrivener.

Purchase e-book covers for Searcher of Riven and Ruins of Yarnud from Fiveer.

Purchase an e-book cover for Assassin in New Marl City from Fiveer.

Planned Events for December 2018

The next conference that I would like to attend is ConFusion in Dearborn, Michigan from January 17 to 20, 2019. ConFusion is sponsored by the Ann Arbor Science Fiction Association.

Link to ConFusion Detroit website.

http://confusionsf.org/

Links

This is a link to my Writing Progress Report for November 2018.

City of Cayn by Jason McDonald, Alan Isom, and Stormy McDonald

The Cayn Trilogy Book #2

Introduction

As the novel opens, Jasper enters the domain of the white circle, a guild of mages, looking for a clue to the cure of the plague introduced in the first book of the Cayn trilogy, Son of Cayn. Xandor and his crew follow the caravan that holds the plague to the former human city of Cherigov, now held by orcs. Jasper must find the cure and Xandor must defeat the orcs or the world faces devastation by the wide release of the plague.

Summary

The first book of the trilogy set up this world and began the plague storyline. The main characters in this novel are Jasper the mage, Sehraine the elf magician, Xandor the ranger, Chert the dwarf priest, Yana the wind rider, Grendel the half-orc, and Sacha the conflicted princess. They head to Cherigov to discover the truth about the plague wars of around twenty years ago. Their opponents are Marko the knight-prince, Sacha’s brother, and the orc king. This novel moves quickly with a clear goal in sight. It is a fitting bridge novel by building up the story while setting up a rousing climax in the third volume of the trilogy.

Recommendation

I enjoyed this novel and am looking forward to reading the concluding volume of this trilogy, Blood of Cayn, due out soon.

Links

Link to Goodreads page for City of Cayn

https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/42930809-city-of-cayn

This is a link to my book review of Son of Cayn, Book #1 of the Cayn Trilogy